"Kill the pig. Cut her throat. Spill her blood."
It rang in my ears, as I climbed down the mountain. I noticed that there was no smoke, which means, no fire!
"JACK!" I said in anger.
"What!?" said Jack, "I was hunting. I got a pig!".
"Hunting!" I shouted. "Thanks to you, a ship just passed by and you didn't keep the signal fire going. That was your duty to keep it burning. You are so preposterous. Don't you want to be rescued?".
Piggy started to whimper as he heard this.
"But I got us food, something to live on", Jack said.
That has nothing to do with what I assigned him to do, keep the fire going, what he's talking about is so irrelevant. I feel like punching Jack so badly right now. As I was thinking of how good it would feel to punch jack, Jack had already punched Piggy. I saw his glasses gyrating through the air. Jack is being so incredulously unreasonable. I don't know what the implication will be.......We my just all die.
4 comments:
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"You are so preposterous" Does that make any sense??
"I saw his glasses gyrating through the air."
I really liked how you used the word gyrating, I thought it was very creative and I could really imagine it. There are some errors but otherwise it's really good.
The whole preposterous sentence actually does make sense. -skylar
As I rush down the mountain to the signal fire,
umm thats is wrong it should be ran up the mountain
but it was really god it could have been better if there was more info but it was good
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