"It was a murder"Ralph said quietly.
"No it wasn't a murder, it was an accident" I said.
Even though I said that, I didn't really believe what I said. I know it was dark and there was a storm but that probably wouldn't stop Jack.
As I heard a voice say "Piggy, Piggy" I got up. The first thing that came to my mind was that it was the beast. " Piggy, come here Piggy". I couldn't breathe. My asthma started to get worse. I would breathe as hard as I could in but it did work. My lungs felt like they were clogged. The beast had come for me. Three bodies came in to the shelter and even though I knew it wasn't the beast anymore my asthma wouldn't stop. I gesticulated by putting my hand over my throat. I was trying to tell Ralph that I was having my asthma attack and I couldn't breathe but since it was dark, I was no use.
I couldn't see but I could hear that people were fighting. Then it sounded like it had stopped.
I started to get up to go to see what had happened. I reached for my glasses but is all I felt was sand. "Who took my glasses?"
2 comments:
I really like your writing with the quatons and the paragraphs and the words used correctly
I liked the title it made me want to read it all even though i knew what was happening.
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