"Yes I did, that's what I'm looking for" as the little boy said with his mouth full.
"Me too!" I said with excitement. "Do you want to look for it together?".
"Yeah sure but we better go now because it's getting late" the boy said. We started to walk to where we thought the sound had come from earlier.
After walking for what felt like miles, we finally found the beach. I almost jumped with suprize when we found a group of people, sitting on the beach. In front of me there was almost every boy from the plane. They were shouting at two boys in the front, by the lagoon. Then a group of boys dressed in decorous outfits walked up. The boys were talking about who should be leader.
"I think it should be me!" Jack said vainly. Ralph interposed, "Who wants me to be leader?" the crowd rose to a clamor. When the boys went crazy for Ralph, Jack's face looked very pallor. I could see that piggy was filled with indignation when Ralph told Piggy he had to stay back in a strident tone. Ralph and Jack were speculating if we were on island or if anyone else was here.
I cheered for Ralph and I'm glad he's the leader. I think that Jack wouldn't be a good leader for us because I don't think he can handle all of these people.
2 comments:
I like the beginning of your story where the boy is pondering whether to go see what the noise was. It was very descriptive. I think you used indignation wrong though...
It was a good story and I really liked how you described what happened. you also used the words very well.
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